I am finally commenting!! Consider the delay a small taste of what I go through while I wait for your updates!! ;)

Ok, I loved it, of course! I can't think of any real criticism to say. I am glad Feanor & Finarfin get along - all considered.

“Why does everyone beget their children at my house?”

HAHA! Man, that must be some awkward food-for-thought for Maitimo!!

Secretly, I think that Macalaurë’s spongy casseroles and stringy, overcooked meats are far from welcoming.

Lol! No wonder they are all so skinny!

I feel sorry for Indis. She tries, but just can't get it right, which, is not really her fault.

Keep the westernmost bedroom on the third floor ready for us.” He winks.

Does anyone else think that the Finwions might all be sexaholics? ;)