ext_180815 ([identity profile] arandil13.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] silwritersguild 2005-09-02 06:54 pm (UTC)

Re: THE IMPERFECT GIFT

Now we shall have to see what I can cook up for Arandil's birthday

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

This was wonderful. So very hott. So very bad to read at work. Drool wreaks havoc on a keyboard.

Who said married people (elves) can't have hott sex?

Poor Feanor. We have the same impression though. I don't see him really fitting in with all the elves in Tirion. I don't see them particularly getting on with Nerdanel either.

Poor poor hungover Feanor.

One little thing - (I hate to nitpick such a great vignette). "The day Feanor became a man" seems iffy - since he really, technically doesn't become a "man" I mean, I know what you mean, but he's an elf, not a man and...

...shutting up...

GREAT STORY!!! WHEEE!!! TWO ON FRIDAY!!!! AND NOW VACA!!!!YAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!

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