Hi, Digdigil! Thanks for the detailed comments. They're my favorite; I love them :D
actually, you have "bolder" Oh, good eye! I perpetually miss these kinds of typos in my own work. I start to know the words so well that I just gloss the text and read from "memory," I guess. Thank you for noticing!
So much more sexy than just writing plain, graphic smut (not that there's anything wrong with that!!).
Yes, I try to include SWAP in my stories--sex with a purpose :p As much fun as random smut can be...I can't do it myself. I am trying to show that Maitimo is very nervous and prim around her, despite having had "girlfriends" before and despite her being "below" him...I hope it works!
Whoops. I was afraid we were going to get some slash there between M&M, but I should have known better! Hee!Hee!Hee!
Yes, I do not write slash personally, although I can direct you to some excellent M&Ms...erm, I mean, I never read slash. Of course not. ::looks around guiltily/polishes halo::
Seriously, (haha, yeah right! :D) I like to believe that the Elves--especially in Valinor--would not have had the same taboos that we have. They have a certain innocence. They would not have shunned nudity like many people do and would have seen nothing wrong with brothers sharing a bed. Besides, Macalaure is *very* innocent and probably doesn't even have everything completely figured out yet.
So, sorry to disappoint the masses, but there's no MaeFin in this story. Actually, "Fin" is the equivalent of a seven-year-old--that's not only unethical, but I think it's illegal!
Oh, this is very good: "He already captured four (orgasms) in you, me, T&C". I LOVE that line!
For all Macalaure's innocence, Nelyo is *not.* And he does delight in embarrassing his brother! :)
Thank you so much for reading and for the comments! Now off to your story! :D
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Re: AMC: Chapter Seven
Date: 2005-08-02 12:32 am (UTC)Thanks for the detailed comments. They're my favorite; I love them :D
actually, you have "bolder"
Oh, good eye! I perpetually miss these kinds of typos in my own work. I start to know the words so well that I just gloss the text and read from "memory," I guess. Thank you for noticing!
So much more sexy than just writing plain, graphic smut (not that there's anything wrong with that!!).
Yes, I try to include SWAP in my stories--sex with a purpose :p As much fun as random smut can be...I can't do it myself. I am trying to show that Maitimo is very nervous and prim around her, despite having had "girlfriends" before and despite her being "below" him...I hope it works!
Whoops. I was afraid we were going to get some slash there between M&M, but I should have known better! Hee!Hee!Hee!
Yes, I do not write slash personally, although I can direct you to some excellent M&Ms...erm, I mean, I never read slash. Of course not. ::looks around guiltily/polishes halo::
Seriously, (haha, yeah right! :D) I like to believe that the Elves--especially in Valinor--would not have had the same taboos that we have. They have a certain innocence. They would not have shunned nudity like many people do and would have seen nothing wrong with brothers sharing a bed. Besides, Macalaure is *very* innocent and probably doesn't even have everything completely figured out yet.
So, sorry to disappoint the masses, but there's no MaeFin in this story. Actually, "Fin" is the equivalent of a seven-year-old--that's not only unethical, but I think it's illegal!
Oh, this is very good: "He already captured four (orgasms) in you, me, T&C". I LOVE that line!
For all Macalaure's innocence, Nelyo is *not.* And he does delight in embarrassing his brother! :)
Thank you so much for reading and for the comments! Now off to your story! :D