Hilarious! Actually, the second person works quite well for this piece (and I'm not fond of second person, having seen too many "experimental" pieces utterly flop under it ;) and I'll admit that I laughed out loud several times. You nicely combine Elven traditions with our traditions, and the Finweans are as lovable and obnoxious as ever.
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Date: 2007-04-10 08:53 pm (UTC)