Wow that is beautiful. Great gap-filler of how the conversation between Gwindor and Finduiluas might've gone if they had seen each other again at the Hall of Mandos. I'm most impressed by your description He cupped a little of the water, let it fall though his hand. There was a patch of stillness at the stream’s edge, where he could catch the merest glimmer of his own reflection. Hale and fair once again, the image of his young self, save for the eyes.
I also liked reading about what they thought Turin did because FInduilas did believe in him but his rashness was the doom for all. But it's interesting to read about conflicting views on what led to Nargothrond's fall.
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Date: 2007-06-01 02:49 am (UTC)He cupped a little of the water, let it fall though his hand. There was a patch of stillness at the stream’s edge, where he could catch the merest glimmer of his own reflection. Hale and fair once again, the image of his young self, save for the eyes.
I also liked reading about what they thought Turin did because FInduilas did believe in him but his rashness was the doom for all. But it's interesting to read about conflicting views on what led to Nargothrond's fall.
Beautiful. I hope you write more!