This was a very interesting story, Dwim. Seeing the thought-process--as it were--of the two young soldiers was both poignant and a little chilling. I was very impressed by the shame in each of them--shame that they failed to kill the other, shame of their weakness. I kept wondering who would break and finally get it over with, and so I loved the openness you gave it. Great job! Thanks!
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Re: Beyond the Pale - Dwim
Date: 2009-03-13 02:36 pm (UTC)Ledys