Well you write him so well, who cares about a little fungurling? I sure don't!
And I agree, death was unnatural for elves, therefore so must returning to life have been equally unnatural and hard. Your Finarfin was so real and so emotionally wrenched by watching his son's torment that I wanted to hug him. I read you might be going to write a follow on chapter or two, cant' wait to see Finrod's reaction to Amarie and his mother.
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Date: 2006-01-08 12:25 pm (UTC)And I agree, death was unnatural for elves, therefore so must returning to life have been equally unnatural and hard. Your Finarfin was so real and so emotionally wrenched by watching his son's torment that I wanted to hug him. I read you might be going to write a follow on chapter or two, cant' wait to see Finrod's reaction to Amarie and his mother.