Well it didn't read that abstract, the pacing feels a wee bit off. But it can be me, I might need a cup of tea first. :c)
I love the parallels between nature and the qualities in Feanor, a feeling of longing, restlesness and such: beautifully conveyed. From longing for something she cannot name, it slowly merges into falling in love to being loved, but what gave me the shivers the most is the parallel to Celebrimbor's greatest works three generations further on: the creation of the elfstone which will later on in history will have such great importance and gives hope as well. Or maybe I am reading too much into this one. I was wondering this, why eight fires? Maybe instead of 8 fires, 9 fires would be more fitting or do you only want to relate to Fëanor and her sons (*pets the poor & sad Celebrimbor on his head*)... I just feel so sorry for Celebrimbor somehow...
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Date: 2006-12-04 08:15 am (UTC)I love the parallels between nature and the qualities in Feanor, a feeling of longing, restlesness and such: beautifully conveyed. From longing for something she cannot name, it slowly merges into falling in love to being loved, but what gave me the shivers the most is the parallel to Celebrimbor's greatest works three generations further on: the creation of the elfstone which will later on in history will have such great importance and gives hope as well. Or maybe I am reading too much into this one. I was wondering this, why eight fires? Maybe instead of 8 fires, 9 fires would be more fitting or do you only want to relate to Fëanor and her sons (*pets the poor & sad Celebrimbor on his head*)... I just feel so sorry for Celebrimbor somehow...