The "Ask a Character a Question" Challenge

[dawn_felagund]

In answer to jilba's question for the "Ask a Character a Question" challenge, I wrote three drabbles. The drabbles are from Macalaurë's perspective and answer the following question, proposed by Jillian:

Why didn't you rescue Maedhros; why did the poor chap have to wait for cousin Fingon to go get him?

For those who do not know, drabbles are short pieces of fiction that are *exactly* one hundred words in length. They are my new hobby in an attempt to curb my loquacity rambling lengthiness in writing. Not that I am going to stop writing long stories--I don't think I can--but it is good to be able to change hats every now and again.

Title: Oaths Sworn
Author: dawn_felagund
Rating: General
Warnings: none


I.
The firelight touches my brother’s face as he speaks to us. The parchment in his fingers does not tremble. It would tremble in mine. “Moringotto will treat with us,” he says.

Our voices rise and collide in the silence. Our words tangle in senseless cacophony: argument and agreement, pale hands flashing like moths to the flame, but Maitimo says nothing. He nods, raises his palm to us.

Silence.

I watched my father flare into brilliance—a star in the night—and end as dust. The firelight blazes on Maitimo’s hair. I can believe that he will share the same fate.

II.
My brother assembles his guard. Tyelkormo and the twins want to ride with him; I see them arguing. I know by the ways their eyes flash and their faces twist that they are losing.

“If you fall, we would be closer to failure. The Oath would be broken.”

He strides to me, and I hold his sword for him while he mounts. We do not speak; words long since unnecessary between us. I hand him his blade, and his eyes meet mine.

“If I do not return, follow me not.”

I have no time for protest before he rides away.

III.
The slow fall of hoofbeats in the street startles me from the surface of restless sleep. It is morning, although morning brings only darkness here.

I push the drape aside and stare into the street. I see horses. The horses of Maitimo’s guard have returned to their homes, but their riders have not. Their legs are speckled by dark splatters.

Feeling not the cold floor on my bare feet, I throw open the door. Maitimo’s horse stares me in the eye, dragging behind him by brother’s trampled banner.

I sob into my hand. Two oaths I should not have sworn.
~oOo~


This is cross-posted to my personal journal as well. Apologies for any redundancy.

Comments are always appreciated. Also, nelyo's post brought up another good question: If Maglor had been placed in Fingon's position as Maedhros' rescuer, what would have he have done?

::opens nuzgûl hutch:: Feed, my pretties! >:-D

Comments

[jilba.livejournal.com]

I found it, I found it!

Fancy Boromir meeting Maglor in the Wild? But probably not, not really. I wouldn't be surprised if he followed that company, And maybe guided Boromir's steps to Rivendell's hidden ways without Boromir's knowledge. The cute bit was Boromir's thought that Faramir should be there. A pity he wasn't.

Another Maglor bunny: I have always thought he was one of those sent from Rivendell when Glorfindel was, to look for Aragorn and the Hobbits. To Maglor, the Ringwraiths would have no more scary than a bunch of rowdy schoolboys. Further along those lines (watch the bunnies breed...)who would have Elrond have sent with the Fellowship from his household had not Merry and Pippin gone along? His sons? Great warriors? Or those born in Valinor like Glorfindel...and Maglor?

So, I'm getting far fetched here, and I'm going to go further. I don't believe Maglor could have missed the news his foster granddaughter was Queen of Gondor. Whether she knew him before then or not, I can see him visiting Gondor and singing for the Queen. Bunnies anyone?

[dawn_felagund]

Bunnies anyone?

Nooooo!!!!!!!!

I am covered in them already!

I like your AU world, though. I always prefer to think that Elrond had fond remembrance of his foster-father, despite Maglor's deeds at the end of of the First Age.

::shoos bunnies back in Jillian's direction::

[jilba.livejournal.com]

That's ok. Fang here, the giant plot bunny eating ferret will dispatch all bunnies promptly.

As for my AU world, well, whether it happened or not, I think you're right. Elrond would have had fond memories of his foster father. I mean, he looked after Elrond and Elros. Technically they were prisoners of war, or hostages and could have been treated as such. I like to think it shows the fact elves are basically good, that Maedhros and especially Maglor treated the boys so well.