New Member and Help Please?

[tineryn.livejournal.com]

Hello, all.

I am relatively new to Silm writing (I have done LotR for a while). I recently wrote a one chapter, Maglor-centric story that, while it is not completely horrid, is in need of a decent beta. I edited it myself as best I could, but am afraid to continue and risk doing the story harm.

The story is untitled. It was written for Christmas, is set in the Modern era and necessarily AU. I have it posted in my LJ if anyone cares to peek, and if someone, preferably with beta experience, would help me, I'd be much obliged.

Thank you very much!

~tineryn

Comments

[mirien.livejournal.com]

Um, I can't do it until after the New Year, but if you haven't found anyone I'll step up. Maglor is my favourite Elf and I am really pernickity about him and the Silm, but I'm fairly gentle too! So if you haven't found anyone by then, I should be able to do it.

What do you want the beta for? Grammar, punctuation, story?

Oh and welcome, we're a nice bunch!

Mirien

[tineryn.livejournal.com]

I was looking at style, development, clarity... and I think I over commaed, at least in the beginning.

Thanks!

[mirien.livejournal.com]

Yep, I can look at all that. I'm away for New Year, but back on the 2nd, so any time after that - before I start working on my [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com] stories! My email is jen@yellowspoon.co.uk.