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Okay, so I'll stop with the corny acrostic style subject line...

Here is my entry for Finarfin Appreciation Month. A drabble on the knightly virtue Courage. (If you'd like to see all seven virtues, you can go to my journal). 

Courage

He stood, the icy wind whipping his hair around him, with the north road to his left and the traveled path to his right. People called out, but he heeded none.
Why do you tarry?
What are you thinking on?
Why have you come?
The last thought his own, he turned to watch the last of the caravan walk toward him, then past him. He sighed and steeled himself.
Behind him, his brothers, his sons, his people, walked on in search of glory and of new lands. But for him, one step forward led him down the lonely road home.


Since we seem to have a rather uncheerful trend going on, I'm going to try giving the poor elf some chocolate and see if I can't turn out a happy!Finarfin piece next time!

Date: 2006-01-11 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fanged-geranium.livejournal.com
Three cheers for Finarfin - the most courageous Finwion of the lot!

Date: 2006-01-13 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jilba.livejournal.com
Finarfin had plenty of courage, he just used it differently to his brothers! I hope we do see a happy!Finarfin next time.

Date: 2006-01-15 03:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jilba.livejournal.com
Smarter, or more able to think forward and see the consequences? Certainly Feanor can't see shit coming, and Fingolfin was bound by the words 'where my brother leads, I shall follow' but the Noldor ought really to seen disaster coming.

Then again, the elves should have thought that if the Valar appeared to be doing nothing about Morgoth, there was a reason, and that rebelling was not helping anyone. Maybe Finarfin was the only who did think this?

Date: 2006-01-15 04:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jilba.livejournal.com
Perhaps he has more common sense? Feanor sure doesn't have much, and I wonder about Fingolfin with his duel with Morgoth, it was brave of him, but he was bound to loose...typical Noldor leaping in where Angels fear to tread.

Can I loan you a ferret for that bunny?

Date: 2006-01-15 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jilba.livejournal.com
Ferret on it's way!

Poor Fingolfin, impulsive and temper driven like Feanor though he is, I can't help but like the guy!

Date: 2006-01-15 04:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jilba.livejournal.com
Well, ok. (Just in the impulsive temper driven department.) He's not like Feanor at all!

Date: 2006-01-15 04:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jilba.livejournal.com
Not without thumb screws!

Date: 2006-01-16 08:55 pm (UTC)
dawn_felagund: (art lives)
From: [personal profile] dawn_felagund
I finally got over to read this! I saw it last week, but ensuing events required me to actually work at work on Wednesday. The humanity!

I like the fact that you brought out Finarfin's own variety of courage in this. It irks me to hear him called a wimp all the time. Really, he had no idea what awaited him back in Valinor. For all he knew, the Valar would kick him right back out again, and he'd be crawling back to his brothers with his tail between his legs.

Not to mention what reconstructing Valinor, Tirion, and Alqualonde must have involved, after the murder of Finwe, the death of the Trees, the kinslaying, and the exile of 90% of the Noldorin population.

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